Monthly Archives: October 2010

A Sure-Fire Way Not To Sell Your First Script

Want to  make absolutely sure you don’t sell that first script? Here’s a tip:

Make sure it’s like all the others.

I see loads of well-written scripts (and a fair load of badly written scripts too) and I’ve seen just about every fault that writers have ever invented. But there’s one flaw that stands out as being the real killer:

It’s just not different.

There’s nothing special. Nothing that makes it stand out from the crowd.

Hang on, I hear you say. There are a thousand movies and TV dramas made every year that are total mindless clones of movies and dramas that went before. Someone must have commissioned them.

Yes. But here’s the rub: they’ve already got thousands of mindless writers (and good ones) they can call on to write those. What’s more those writers can be relied on to deliver precisely the right level of 9th rate writing. (Nothing too classy that might demand expensive actors, add to the budget, etc).

Why should they hire you?

What they want from you – a fresh, exciting new talent – is something different. Something they can’t get elsewhere. Something that’s pure you.

That Barton Fink feeling!

So, go back over that script and ask yourself how you can give it that special something – that unique selling point – that one thing nobody else has done. Is it twist in the genre? A new way of looking at something familiar? A variation on an old theme? Where is your individual voice? Give it that Barton Fink feeling.

Then, when they’ve bought you, then they’ll try to make you the same as everyone else.

But that’s another story.

Want to know more?

If you want more sure-fire ways  not to sell your script… and, better still, ways to sell it, you need to know what buyers want, how to get to them, how to get them excited, how to use social media to promote your work, how to pitch, what to ask for when you meet, whether you need a lawyer or an agent.

I’m covering it all in Selling Your First Script (and your next… and your next…) – October 23 in London.

Come and learn to do it right.

The Kindest Cut

Here’s a tip that will work for just about every script, novel, short story, short film, movie or TV series.

You’ve just finished your draft. The story’s more or less there. But something’s not quite right. You look at it and you don’t know where to start editing. It’s not ready to send out to a professional script reviewer. It needs work – but what? And where?

Let me tell you in just a few short words. I don’t even have to read your script. I just know:

Cut the start

The opening is too long. You take too long to get into the story. Too many scenes before you establish the characters. Too many things are there to “set up” things that happen later.

How do I know? Because everyone does the same. Beginners and experienced. The difference is that the experienced writers know it and deal with it.

Get into it

Read through your script until you find where your story really starts. Not the bits you think you need to put in – where it actually gets going. There’s where you cut to. I don’t care if it’s page 3, page 30 or page 300.

Good stories dive straight in. Good stories grab you from the beginning with interesting, complex, active characters.

Cut the start of the script. And for good measure, cut the start of most scenes, cut the start of most speeches, cut all the explanation, the setting up, the exposition.

There – that feels better, doesn’t it?